Tuesday, December 11, 2007

Macks Football

My book is about a fifteen year old girl named Macey. She stays with her parents but you can say that she lives with her grandparents which stays a couple of miles down the road. She is a smart girl who participates in alot of after school activities. Her grandparents are caring and supportive in whatever she does and they want to see her succeed.

In my opinion, the characters in my story seem believable. The girl (Macey), sounds like a regular high school student who likes to participate in after school activities. Also her grandparents seem believable because they spend as much time with her as possible and help her out when she needs it. I can relate to the grandparents because what grandparents you know doesnt want to spend time with their grand-children? I can relate to the grandparents helping Macey because they have the knowledge and by passing this down to her is only going to benefit her in the long run.





Tamere Shannon

1 comment:

Mr. Malley said...

Tamere, what kind of activities does Macey take part in?